Hi Willow Tree
Your post got my curiosity up. So, firstly, let me say, sorry but I can't help with the Hebrew. I'm not very good at it.
Some information i found though, is that, that particular Adoration is paraphrased from Poemandres Corpus Hermeticum line 31 i think. The original Adoration was in Greek. You may be able to find it on the Internet somewhere. Would it be more accurate to translate from the original Greek to Hebrew? Rather than from The translated English to Hebrew. Anyhow, i will paste the English translation here, just in case.
Holy art Thou, O God, the universals' Father.
Holy art Thou, O God, whose Will perfects itself by means of its own Powers.
Holy art Thou, O God, who willeth to be known and art known by Thine own.
Holy art Thou,who didst by Word (Logos) make to consist the things that are.
Holy art Thou, of whom All-nature hath been made an image.
Holy art Thou, whose Form Nature hath never made.
Holy art Thou, more powerful than all power.
Holy art Thou, transcending all pre-eminence.
Holy Thou art, Thou better than all praise.
LLLMark